④分词短语。如:
Satisfied with the result,he decided to go on with a new experiment.
⑤倒装句。如:
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
⑥省略句。如:
If so,victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
⑦对比,这是中文中也常用的方法。如:
Failure is not a crime,but failure to learn from failure is.When I play,I feel e xcited,and after it I feel relaxed.
3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。如：
［原文］He stopped us half an hour ago.He made us catch the next offender.
［修正］He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
［原文］We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Som e told stories.Some played chess.
［修正］After a short rest,we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes an d playing chess.
4.学会使用过渡词。如:
①递进:then (然后),besides(还有),furthermore(而且),moreover (此外)等。
②转折:however(然而),but (但是),on the contrary(相反),after all (毕竟)等。
③总结:finally(最后),at last(最后),in brief(总之)，in conclusion (最后)等。
④强调:indeed {确实),certainly(一定),surely(确定),above all (尤其)等。
⑤对比:in the same way(同样地),just as(正如),on(the) one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
5.注意使用不同长度的句子。
二、对于“较复杂的词汇",可以从以下几个方面着手。
1.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:
［原文］A new railway is being built in my hometown.
［修正］A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
2.使用一些很有“洋味"的单词。如:
Thank you for sharing the time with us. The way he views the world is very practical.
3.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如：
［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
写作训练：
1. 有一批要到中国投资的外国企业家在我国某城市参观考察。假定你是接待人员，要向外宾们简要介绍这个城市的概况。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的发言稿，须包括以下内容：
1)这是一座新兴的现代化城市,建于20世纪80年代初；
2)海陆空交通便利，又有一条与首都北京相连的高速公路(freeway);
3)自然资源丰富，电力及其他能源供应充足；
4)公共秩序(the public order)良好，政府多方面支持外国投资者(investor)。
注意：短文开头己写出，不计入总词数。
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